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Rob D's avatar

Chilling yet beautiful!

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Rob Dubya's avatar

Thanks Rob. I'm still suffering from writers block. This one was started about 5 months ago but I never got further than about 8 lines. They ended up forming the middle 2 verses, and the first and last came to me today. Some of these just seem to down load in full, while others you really need to work at.

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The Word Herder's avatar

write anyway. anything. or doodle, just keep the pen in hand. This poem is so powerful.

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Rob Dubya's avatar

Thanks Jaan 😍

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Brian Root's avatar

Nice "Cenotaph etched, more work for the mason".

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Rob Dubya's avatar

Thanks Brian.

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The Word Herder's avatar

Wow, excellent. Powerful, poignant, full of righteous indignation...

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